Sunday, June 14, 2020

100WC #38

We were walking through the desert and saw all the animals playing around and having fun. There were elephants, giraffes, lions, and many  more. Some were playing in the water and squirting each other. I jumped in to have some fun but then saw everyone running somewhere we jumped out and followed there were random seats that everyone sat on. The giraffes were at the back and the little animals in the front. I sat in the middle row and looked towards the stage everyone was whispering wondering what was going on then that's when the elephant delivered his speech.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 15, 2020 at 5:10 PM

    Dear Ella,
    Your 100 Word Challenge was very descriptive. I could picture the story in my head, really well. That is a really good post! You should be very proud of yourself.
    Question, what made you come up with the idea?
    Best Wishes, Sophie

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  2. AnonymousJune 21, 2020 at 2:11 PM

    Dear Ella,
    It's really cool how you took time to describe the seats it painted a detailed picture in my head! Maybe next time you could try to put some speech or a short sentance in! Great job!
    Sincerely Anika!

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  3. AnonymousJune 21, 2020 at 2:14 PM

    Hi Ella,
    I really like your writing because there is lots of adjectives, and like (Sophie?) said i can picture this in my head lots. Something you could work on is: what was the elephants speech going to be about? i really like your writing i want it to keep on going. Thanks,
    Mollie

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